All of a sudden,I saw a strange girl in old leather clothes. I trotted towords the strange looking girl and gave her a nervous wave. The boy said,”Hello. What is your name Because my name is Harry.”
My name is Om.” There was a moment of silence until the girl walked towards me. The scared girl offered Harry,”would you like to come and have some stew and meet my family?
The boy replied “sure,why not?.” When I got there I saw how nice the family was and the gave me some stew
all of the sudden, I saw a strange girl.” She walked up to me and said,” Who are you?” said the girl. so i said,” my name is Kadon.” said the boy. what is your name? Said the boy. My name is Om.
would you like to come with me to my family?” said the girl.” OH YES PLEASE!
All of a sudden,I saw a strange girl in old leather clothes. I trotted towords the strange looking girl and gave her a nervous wave. The boy said,”Hello. What is your name Because my name is Harry.”
My name is Om.” There was a moment of silence until the girl walked towards me. The scared girl offered Harry,”would you like to come and have some stew and meet my family?
The boy replied “sure,why not?.” When I got there I saw how nice the family was and the gave me some stew
Check your first sentence of speech please. Rewrite below!
The boy said “Hello.”
What is missing before the speech marks?
The boy said, “Hello.”
all of the sudden, I saw a strange girl.” She walked up to me and said,” Who are you?” said the girl. so i said,” my name is Kadon.” said the boy. what is your name? Said the boy. My name is Om.
would you like to come with me to my family?” said the girl.” OH YES PLEASE!
WOW Nathaniel! You’ve had a go at this at home! Well done! I love your energy and dedication.
thank you Mrs Henderson.
and also i havent been in school today because my tung Hurt and sting
thank you Mrs Henderson.